Tuesday, October 12, 2010

School Holiday Recounts

This week we are writing about our holiday activities.
This is an image similar to Mr Neale learning to snowboard over the holidays!
We are focussing on structuring our writing by making a plan first.
Then our aim is to have an introduction, interesting events with good descriptions and a definite ending. The students are working twards their personal writing goals.Please ask them to tell you what their goal is. Mr Searle.

1 comment:

Whaea Jane said...

Wow, sounds like some excellent writing will be coming out of the Middle Room again. Looking forward to seeing it. And, Mr Neale looks like a legend - a man with so many talents!!