Friday, July 31, 2009

During writing Middle Roomers have been working on hooking the reader and show not tell. We try really hard to engage the reader with an interesting opening sentence. Throughout our story we work hard to show what is happening rather than tell.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

It was great to see all from Mahana School running I have not been around for a while out of site out of mind. from mrs mop number 1