WALT: use fullstops, capital letters and ?

The gargantuan whale smashed down the stern of the ship. Crash! the whale has been hit by a harpoon. The whale went down and a torpedo flung in the air blew up. It mixed with the ships oil, cadosh! Splat the ship smashed to smithereens like pouring salt on a snail or a volcano exploding. Cadosh a massive submarine exploded into the air, fire the torpedos a voice shouted. At first they looked like rocks, and they got bigger and bigger. Splat! the whales blood flew through the air like a black bird plane. The people from the ship, their blood was everywhere, beep beep beep... BOOM! The submarine exploded. Blood flew everywhere. The 7 seas are no longer, they are now the 7 seas of blood.

A lovely description Luke. You have used level 2 punctuation and some level 3, great stuff. I especially like the similes you included. Keep up the awesome imagination Luke. Mrs S

Twister

Twisting and twirling
Ripping and swirling
Swooping and falling
Waning and dieing
Raining and crying
Tossing and turning
The sound swirls like a hurricane, into my head

AMMONITES

The ground used to be the sea bed and then New Zealand came up from the sea and put all the ammonites up. A big earth quake pushed New Zealand up out of the water. We worked out what the difference between molds and fossils.

Beast Quest

Shring the evil beast slashed Toms sword. Eeeeek somebody opens the door. "It was Elenna" Tom shouted! Elenna shot one of her arrows at Stings neck. The beast screamed of pain. Sting pulled the arrow out of his neck. Lots of black blood went pouring out of his neck, eeeeee. Tom cuts stings tail off. Bccc Sting falls dead on the ground, hooray we defeated Sting.
I wouldn't celebrate right now...

Trees without leaves

Rustling trees losing leaves
Trees without leaves
Leaves tumbling down the trees
Brown and yellow leaves rustling down the trees