The Thunder Storm

Thunder  strikes above me  ''CRACK! BANG! FLASH!'' I look up to see black clouds and bright thunder . 
I feel scared and frighted at the same time. Suddenly a flash , the power turned off into blackness .
'' help! help! please!'' I screeched hoping somebody would help me.I ran for the cupboard and got out my torch, I ran outside. But I ran under a tree as thunder struck ''ZAP!'' I was dead on the ground!.
from Alana!.