Rachel and Squirt

"Hey Squirt, stop pecking me" said Rachel. She had a parrot named Squirt. Rachel had Squirt since she was 5. He was her birthday present. She lived in a castle far, far away. The guards are ghosts. One day Rachel was out. The ghosts were sleeping and Squirt was playing with his toys. At 2.00 Rachel was meant to come home but instead Charlie the Robot came (Charlie is Rachel's enemy). He loved Squirt. When he came he bird napped Squirt. Luckily the ghosts woke up and scared Charlie away and he dropped Squirt. The ghosts let him out but Squirt had a sprained wing. When Rachel came home she was so sad. immediately she rang the bird hospital. he had to stay there for 2 nights.  By Zeta

Enchanted wood

 Part 1

Whoosh, a fairy flew past me, and another. I never knew there was magic in my forest. "chatter, chatter, chatter" I heard fairies talking away. "Squeak, squeak" it was a little mouse nearby. It started to crawl up me and I held it in my hands. I felt my hands tingle with excitement, I was ready...

Part 2

I sneak in the hole with the animals. Swoosh, I faintly heard a cackling noise... "magic, magic, magic little cat". I thought it was a witch but then I walked in. I saw it was a WIZARD. I stepped in slowly "hi, what's your name? My name is Pippy what's yours?"
"I am wizard head". 

By Yasmina

The Thunder Storm

Thunder  strikes above me  ''CRACK! BANG! FLASH!'' I look up to see black clouds and bright thunder . 
I feel scared and frighted at the same time. Suddenly a flash , the power turned off into blackness .
'' help! help! please!'' I screeched hoping somebody would help me.I ran for the cupboard and got out my torch, I ran outside. But I ran under a tree as thunder struck ''ZAP!'' I was dead on the ground!.
from Alana!.

One fishing Trip

My hands grab the fishing rod. My heart is pumped. The night is staring at me like a beer. Ten minutes  I 'm later hooked, my little hands grab my rod. I can’t hold it any more! My dad takes over. He reels it in. It took an hour to reel in but it was worth       
it though!   By Eva

Walt: do better hooks

Walt: do better hooks  

example

 The car zoomed across the long bridge as some lighting struck."ah"they screamed in horror (crash) they reversed out of the side of the bridge and carried on their ride.

The Bush Walk

Wow this is going to be the best weekend ever. I am going
on a bush walk with my friends . We played I spy. There was one problem a tree fell down on the track and we had to climb over it . “We will stop for lunch in 30 minutes” I said . Finally it was lunch ctime. we ate quickly when we finally got there for dinner. I had a big drink and yummy sausages . I fell straight asleep after that. By Heidi

Serpent in the Forest

Jack and Peter  were going tramping  in the forest in America. They want to tramping because they like tramping. They set up their tent for the night. Suddenly it got very dark after they got their tent up. They went in and went to bed but a serpent came to the tent. They heard it. Jack and Peter took the tent with them. By Jock